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Grading
Title: 5/5
Truthfully, it was a weird title. But it did suit your story. Though, it was kinda predictable.
Poster/Background: 8/10
The poster is supposed to be the Love Wheel. In my opinion, the poster could have more glitter…like a ferries wheel shining brightly during the night. The background was kinda plain, it should have had more glitter too.
Forewords: 8/10
Not much of a forewords. You prologue was interesting though.
Plot: 13/15
Simple and very imaginable. Very cute!!
Creativity/Originality: 8/10
Taiwan dramas have around the same kind of plot!!
Flow: 9/10
The language was used very well. Though, it was just a one-shot. You manage to flow the story really well.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 9 /10
You forewords had a few spelling errors..your introduction I mean. Otherwise, everything looks great!!
Characterization: 6/10
Your characters weren’t quite interesting. There weren’t names of the characters so I had only been able to comment on the feeling you tried to bring out from the characters.
Writing Style: 10/10
I liked how you wrote your story.cool!
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Bonus: 5/5
Your story was good overall!!!!
Total: 86/100
